writing

We heard footsteps in the dark at about 1.00 in the morning it kinda sounded the a really big stage so I got my rifle and popped my head out of the tents opening and sure enough there was a big stag roaming around our campsite. I woke Rio and Henry up to tell them the good news. They also got their guns the stag was still there so we let Rio have a crack at it so he did he lined the massive animal in this sites and put the cross hairs on this heart and pulled the trigger it dropped like a sack of potatoes. Rio was the most happiest boy in the whole of New Zealand. It was about 2.00 in the morning and we had just finished up gutting Rios stag if you want to know how much points it had well let's just say there was to many to count. Its 6.00 in the morning and we were on our why to shoot some big stag. After watching Rio shoot that big stage well me and Henry were pumped. We finally arrived at our disaster nation and we called already see deer and they were “BIG”. So we hatched a plan then and there and dissidence that is was Henry's turn


Star: I liked how you involved your friends

Star: I liked how long it was

Wish: i want you to add more punctuation

writing sample clay pigeon shooting

I was in team new zealand and just waiting for a gold medal like a kid that really wants a new Xbox game that just came out!!!!.It was my turn I stepped up to the shooting point and pointed my gun in a safe direction and loaded It gun as the shotgun shells got feed throw the bullet holder I Became more and more nevus wondering if I was going to win I lined my eye up with the bead and yelled pull as soon the clay pigeon came out of the trap I gave it some lead and pulled the trigger  Bang!!!!! the clay pigeon smashed like glass and  fell l to the ground like snow I was revealed and happy that I smoked the last clay pigeon and had not missed one. As soon as they called my name my heart was racing out of my chest I didn't know if i was going to be first or second or third?????.as soon as I placed my foot on first I became the most happiest person on earth after all my hard work off practising and buying new guns and heaps of ammo it finally pad of : )

fact about your eye speech

- Clear introduction, 3 main ideas and conclusion

- Back up each idea with relevant evidence and detail

- Use language devices (rhetorical questions, statistics, emotive language)

- Loud, clear voice

- Engaging and interesting  

- Within the time limit (1minute  3minutes

The eye

Which part of your body lets you read a book, check out a deer, and see a softball coming your way? the part that lets you cry when you're sad and makes tears to protect itself? Which part has muscles that adjust to let you focus on things that are close up or far away?If you guessed the eye, you're right!

               

   Facts about your eyes

The colored area around the pupil is called the iris, it controls the size of the pupil and can be colored           brown, blue, green or other colors and shades
depending on the person.

what am I poem

what am I poem

 I am a animal that lives in the bush I don't eat moosh 

 we have hard things On our head that will make 

you need meds. We have brown muddy fur that looks 

like old rusted metal we love eating grass and we eat it 

fast. Hunters from all over the world comes to hunt us.

 Our meat starts with a v and it doesn't taste like

 pee liam harmer likes to shoot us

 what am I ??????

so this is my what am I poem that we had done ages ago and I had found it so I decided to put it onto my blog  

Digestive system

electronics

                                                        T2 get ready get thru website told me 

   I need a torch with spare batteries or self-charging torch 

I am going to design and make some kind of 

light for an emergency.

learning budy

my scale drawing

in class we were learning about scale drawings our teacher aka miss fisher told us about how we could draw our own scale drawing I choose this stag.

human facts

a soldiers life

                       A soldier's life

In the trench, muddy and cold, my mates are dying of sickness

I want to go to sleep but I can't because my conrade said no.

Where marching away from the front line back to safety

For some rest.

Walking back to safety, most men had no shoes

and it felt like they were walking on prickles.

The men are walking like drunken men.

Most of the men can,t hear the loud booms fly past there heads.

We suddenly felt that we were walk in poisonous gas i shouted out gas mas.

One man was too tired and weak to

put on his uncomfortable gas mask

As the gas got thicker his screams got louder.

The gas is thick all I can here is my soldiers

Coughing with their inconfortable gas mas on.

Our conrad run over to me and pulled on my jersey

And struggling to breath his lifeless eyes gazed at me in pan.

I'm so disgusted by watching my conrad die in agony,

People are so lucky that don’t have

To watch there mates die in pain and pull the Wagon

with dead soldiers in it Echoes of suffering.

A dying man in a  wagon is like hell.

A high pichid scream that persis your ear Drum.

soldier are falling off the wagon and blood splatters everywhere.

The gas is slowly going away I can just about see properly .  

Do you think its right to die for your country?

And watch your friends die in pain and agony.

Listen to bullets fly past your head and bullets

Breaking your bones.

                              Lest we forget

Identity portraits

For art this week we did an identity portraits so we had to draw our faces and then cut out things about yourself out of a magazine.

Gold bbok goals for terms 1&2 2

My gold book goal for terms 1&2 is ....  get a lot of gold points technology and sports so I can get a badge for each


 I will achieve this by .... signing up to sports like softball and rugby and being good in class by not sitting next to my friends


By the end of year 8 I hope to have achieved ....  a gold award and at least a star

P.E

Today for P.E we had an awesome game of non stop cricket we had two games of non stop cricket we were mix the first game second game it was girl boy.

food tec

                                                today for tec we made fruit cabas my favorite
                                                                  part was eating it all

sun smart

                                                                             sun smart

Hi i am a year  7 at hni I am in room 9 and my teacher is Miss.Fisher